Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
Undoubtedly, globalization has provided humungous amount of benefits of developed and developing as well under-developed nations. However, there are several disadvantages those cannot be ignored. This essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of globalization in detail and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, the first and foremost benefit is that globalization has improved the economic growth of the nations, as it allows all nations to expand their businesses in different countries which increases employment and development rate of the nations. Globalization has transformed the entire world to a global village and now travel has become more convenient and faster these days around the world. For example, India’s IT company, Infosys has its offices in different countries and have global workforce to increase the development rate and contribute in economic growth. Therefore, globalization has increased the employment rate and development rate of nations and eventually contribute in nations’ economic growth.
Like every coin has another side, globalization also has some negative effects that it allows communication media to expand and which leads to generation gap as well as cultural shock. Globalization has also boost up the tourism industry as people can easily travel to other countries which increases the pollution and also harmful to the natural resources of nations. For instance, when more people visits beaches they also litter the plastic cans and cups in the ocean and those cause issue to the marine life and many endangered sea creatures are on the verge of extinction. Thus, globalization is affecting negatively to the natural resources and animals.
In conclusion, although, globalization has affected the world’s positively, the negative affects cannot be ignored. Globalization has improved economic growth of the nations but it has negatively affected the natural resources of the nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...the world. For example, India's IT company, Infosys has its offices in different c...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'boosted'.
Suggestion: boosted
... cultural shock. Globalization has also boost up the tourism industry as people can e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.75862068966 365% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72108843537 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17229345844 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527210884354 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3258024331 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.384615385 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206776935816 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901822997861 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774682986697 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144155265842 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833794541501 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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