Globalization is the process of integrating with different ethnic, shopping, culture and living style of people around the world. There are many benefits of globalization but the drawback cannot be denied in the meantime. There may be the different opinion of people on this issue but I believe it has their own pros and cons which will be discussed below.
Firstly, globalization has made the world very small and people are integrated with the different culture, language, etc.… because of globalization, it has many benefits for developing and under developing country, create opportunity for business and employment, change in the living standard of people and nevertheless it has increased the economics of a nation too. For instance, early there was no competition in business due to which there was a monopoly in business but now it has changed and produced the quality product. This is possible because of globalization around the world.
However, there are some bad-effect of globalization in a nation which is impossible to deny. The drawback is, it has disappeared the culture of society, the domestic business failure because of the international dominating market, etc… For example; people are choosing the foreign product like clothes, shoes, etc.… instead of product or brand due to which domestic businesses are getting failure. There are other many issues in which is very necessary to shut down and the government needs to take some step on this problem.
In conclusion, there is pros and cons statement on globalization but I think advantages can be outweighing the disadvantages. So, if the government will step on this cons than it is possible to shut down the issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are pros'?
Suggestion: there are pros
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Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s can be outweighing the disadvantages. So, if the government will step on this cons t...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ges. So, if the government will step on this cons than it is possible to shut down t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20802919708 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99771033444 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489051094891 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.2501091849 50.4703680194 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112551837126 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537164737409 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395000178642 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736102842595 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411016952326 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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