Everyone Should Adopt Vegetarianism

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Everyone Should Adopt Vegetarianism

From the day man used to hunt for his food and other existential substances, till the present era where, everything is available in one single click of a button sitting at his office, a lot more things have been changed. Accelerated growth rate in use of technology could be one reason, which has increased the complexity of modern life style, pushing people into a stressful life. In this present scenario, finding food had has taken a back seat in human’s life. In this essay, I will express the nature and choice of people’s diet and provide a reasonable conclusion to decide, whether eating vegetarian or non-vegetarian food is beneficial.
Many believe that, we must stop killing animals just to fill our stomachs, when a plenty of eatable natural resources are available like, fruits, vegetables and other grains around us. But I tend to disagree with this statements, we eat not only to kill our hunger, but also to survive and lead a fit and healthy life style, in this burgeoning stressful and competitive life, it has become a vital reason to fill our self with highly rich and nutrient food supply. Not all types of nutritional substances are present in vegetables, few are only available in meats, like proteins are rich in red meat, omega is plentiful in fish and other sea foods. Thus, it is important to find the suitable diet for a healthier life.
On contrary, many types of animals are meant for domestic purposes only, like chicken, ducks, turkey, fish, goats etc. Hence, not harming any endangered species and consuming domestic animals which are grown for eating purpose is really an ideal situation.
Hence, adopting vegetarianism is not a compulsion, but the choice left to each individual.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... around us. But I tend to disagree with this statements, we eat not only to kill our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96206896552 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74411921201 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4263091954 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.818181818 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0600033406121 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310109437301 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691170497692 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679012046279 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904405541333 0.0609392437508 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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