In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your own opinion.
Recently, shortage of good schools and medical facilities in rural has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what steps can be taken to deal with this issue?". Whereas it is a widely held view that professional works such as doctors and teachers should be work in remote regions, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the economy standpoint, rural areas are bound up inextricably with poor civilization, which indicates they lead to both less educational system and health center. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between professional careers and working place as well as an exponential increase in annual income. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of caring patient is correlated positively with not only experience but also money.
Within the realm of society, without the slightest doubt, remora regions attribute to slumming house, in that it would come down to poor people, uneducated individuals, and disease. A salient example of such attribution is domestic physician, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take internship period for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint economic problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to freedom, human right, and even new graduated medical student. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of government to providing more facilities for people lived there and more opportunity for workers.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that precise planning and correct policy must be taken to address this issue. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1207.87684729 145% => OK
No of words: 312.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62820512821 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99997260562 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 139.433497537 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2400156409 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.076923077 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171849575987 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476742443056 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541238844733 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925100334737 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699372640571 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 55.0591133005 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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