explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. what can governments do to address these problems? what can individual people do?
The controversial topic with respect to environment change never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on in which way human damages the ecosystem the most and what can government and individuals do to cope with this problem.
As far as I am concerned, the most harmful approach by our human is greenhouse emission and deforestation. First of all, the greenhouse gas can cause the drastic increase in global average temperature. A phenomenon that can lead to the acceleration of polar glaciers melting. For example, the average sea level has raised 2 meters since last century by monitoring. As a result, it brings up several significant problems, especially the decrease of coast territory in some countries. Secondly, the deforestation is part of the reason of some animal's distinction. Because by the reducing amount of forest, animals are imposed to migrate to other habitation in order to survive themselves from this disaster. Thus, both the food chains of some carnivores and herbivores are damaged as the disappearance of predators and preys. In other words, the ecosystem is no longer existing.
Meanwhile, there are still a variety of options which humans can choose to mitigate these problem through government policy and human activity. The most efficient methods that government can take is laws introduction and legislation on tax and revenue. Those companies and factories which emit pollutant annually should take more responsibility on environmental protection. On the other hand, individuals also have the accountability to reduce their impact on this problem. For instance, through daily activities, citizens could choose public transportation rather than driving cars, increasing the frequency of using degradable plastic bags. In light of this, by the actions of both government and individuals, the effects of these efforts can be phenomenal.
In conclusion, among all the harmful influence human have on environment, greenhouse gas emission and deforestation should be considered the most, and through the compulsory policy of governments and self-consciousness by individuals, the damage can be kept in low level.
- It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. 67
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree) 77
- It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. 77
- It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job. Do you agree or disagree? 69
- It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...restation is part of the reason of some animals distinction. Because by the reducing am...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...ons which humans can choose to mitigate these problem through government policy and human act...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d deforestation should be considered the most, and through the compulsory policy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1207.87684729 153% => OK
No of words: 335.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50447761194 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20685943363 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 379.143842365 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 10.0 1.56157635468 640% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.605383041 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33354961801 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834026250621 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109518259281 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193424404702 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901408332493 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 55.0591133005 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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