Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree.
In this day and age of globalization and modernization, the topic about fast food which had been a matter of debate has now become more controversial, thereby leading to a moot question-"has fast food become an essential part of life"? While some people argue that, in this ever moving fast world, junk intakes do not posses much threat, there had been some contentions regarding it. I am strongly inclined to believe that fast food does have negative effect on people's health. I would like to weigh the pros and cons of super quick foods before arriving at a plausible conclusion.
The mammoth help provided by processed food in this highly paced world is humongous. For instance, the dependance on canned food by the working class of today's generation cannot be overlooked. A study conducted by Harvard University concluded that the number of people aligned to frozen or junk food had been increasing to an alarming level with each passing day. One cannot rule out the ease provided by junk food. Such pre-processed food incorporates an easier option to people which in turns increases its demands.
On the contrary, apart from easiness generated by these junk foods, there has been plethora of evil sides to this frozen eateries. This can be illustrated by the number of toddlers and kids seeking medical aids due to deficiency of nutrients.Children as well as adults are deprived of basic vitamins an minerals required for a long term healthy life due to the intake of canned food. As a result of which,people have become slaves to lifestyle diseases.
Henceforth, by diligently analyzing the above viewpoints, it can be indubitably concluded that fast food has turned out to be a significant reservoir of obesity, nutrient deficiency conditions and several other problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, regarding, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16326530612 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99744789405 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9271034555 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291882039177 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100443947154 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06871322458 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161199503121 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106269277567 0.0609392437508 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.