The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Some people thinks it would be very good for both environmental as well as economical growth if we eat the food which is produced locally. it has both merits and demerits. In this essay, we will discuss both benefits as well as drawbacks if we ate only local produced food.
At first, there are different types of foody items available in the market and also it's depend on the weather. there are sea food, vegetables, fruits, continental food, different contries food as different countries has diffrent culture. also if we import and export the food we will met with different cultures and different taste's. also we have the communication with another people's who does't belongs to our community or country.
if we export the items which is more in our country , money comes to our country from another one which makes our economy strong. with that money we buy that things from another country which are not available in our country. also we know what is going in the world and where we stand so that according to that we need to grow.
In conclusion, it has both advantages and disadvantages if we ate local produced food but I overweigh tthe disadvantages of this one.
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- The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages? 55
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76585365854 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59873824674 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556097560976 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8374858749 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8181818182 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.33497536946 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231179286235 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943481197444 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785602804906 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161482563331 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656986769372 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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