Gambling is an activity which causes more harm than good and so should be made illegal in all countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reason and example to support your response.
Gambling is a betting games, the gamblers are addicted to betting. The attraction of the game is the people those who are winning the money which attract others to play game, in the begging of the game they bet less money to play and starting they won the game getting more interest to play another game also betting amount raised further they involved completely in to the game, not able to come out of that.
In duration of game they win or lose, game never stop and the betting money increase by increase the gambler loose his money, asset, jewellery etc. by loosing everything he make addition in to drug and alcohol which help him to relax mind but frustration and anxiety make him to do wrong decision in game and also in life.
For instance, In India before 1999 gambling game is more popular, There were various gambling game such as horseracing, cricket betting, card’s game, lottery etc.
According to this game so many people get in to trouble they loos their family and money, some of them caused by cancer, mentally disorder. So, the Indian government stop this gambling game’s to protect the gambler’s and his family.
Nowadays, some IT sectors are developing the gambling game and started again in internet by using technology. In case future generation will addicted if they would not stop it. For example, rummy circle, dream eleven.
In conclusion, the government of India need to take action again to ban all gambling games from social network. It will enrich the society and develop the economy of nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45047361476 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0010822435 50.4703680194 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0629420528114 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276737271159 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216393169404 0.071462118173 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392487466897 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160862308139 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.94827586207 176% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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