The gap between education in richer countries and education in poorer countries is a growing concern.
What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
It is noticeable the lack of education when comparing people who have studied in fortunate countries with people who have not had such opportunity. Education levels are always subject to make people worried about the future, therefore, some suggestions should be taken in order to solve this problem and give equal learning possibilities for everyone across the world.
In a globalized world, where knowledge has been daily disseminated online and via so many modern channels, the education in rich and developing countries should be spread in the same way and everyone who shows interest in learning should be given the right to access free school and free materials do perform its goals.
Organizations, such as ONU and other global reunions of countries should discuss ways to exchange knowledge and give away better study methods and structure for pupils of poorer countries. In the same way, the government of rich countries should make themselves more open to receiving students all over the world with the vision of a more prosperous future not only for its nation but for the whole world in a larger picture.
To sum up, I believe that the majority of the responsibility for education levels being expanded over a country is from its government and they should make more agreements with countries who are more fortunate in terms of knowledge and opportunities, therefore, everyone would be benefited by those actions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, such as, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15879828326 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79969158063 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587982832618 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.5024630542 185% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1157826497 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.333333333 104.977214359 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8333333333 20.9669160288 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168491010811 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910843627449 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282763350983 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109143667217 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331196814563 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 12.6369458128 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 53.1260098522 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.9458128079 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.3980295567 165% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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