Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.
What is the reason for this?
What problems can this cause?
The effect of parents who are not able to spend quality time with their children which were always debatable has now become controversial. The substantial influence of the globalized world that requires mother and father working in order to afford the expenses of the house has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the children´s education in recent years. It can be agreed that the absence of a maternal and paternal figure in a familiar structure caused some problems, but some people claim that there are some solutions to overcome those issues as well. This essay will elaborate on the reasons and what problems can this fact cause leading to a logical solution.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why a poor relationship between parents and children may affect their future, but the most prominent one stems from the fact that children are daily inspired by their parent´s example. For instance, a teenager who has no substantial and effective example to follow, cannot be lead to a successful path, hence, father and mother play a crucial role in the children´s future.
Approaches to deal with problems of teenagers involved with crime, drugs, and violence are numerous and parents, teachers and government are all charged for the possible consequences, which is not impracticable but comprehensive and needs to generate better control in order to avoid the development of an adult with scars from the past.
To sum up, it is important to preserve the parents' image towards a childhood development from the early ages in order to avoid future trouble because the parents did not spend the amount of time required.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, may, so, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82803906597 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3154604592 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.0 104.977214359 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.375 20.9669160288 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295715655995 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116220008871 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795227802527 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143431394664 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748685522986 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 12.6369458128 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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