Recently, the regional effects on a person’s accomplishments have sparked an ongoing controversy which inevitably leads to moot questions about whether they would be influenced by environment or society? Whereas, it is widely held view that residential neighborhood plays a vital role on a person’s mindset. I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
Firstly, from the individual standpoint, the success and personal growth of any person is bound up inextricably with the opportunities and determinations. This indicated they lead to both successful and improved lifestyle. Although, the there are also certain fundamental aspects of life that tends to decline the morale of a person. As an example from my personal observations, when I was an undergraduate university student, I researched about the impacts of society on personal attitude and personal mindset, From my analyses, I was inclined to believe that an accomplished person is not affected by anyone he in influenced only by the enthusiasm of achieving his goal.
Secondly, those who probably believe that these sort of people can be effected by spoiled society members have different opinions and prospects. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by the group of eminent scientists in 2015 demonstrates the relationship between society and hurdles of a successful path. Researchers, nevertheless, paid heed to the enthusiasm and determination of a person’s mindset, and concluded that success entirely depends on their own and is not affected by the society, this eventually lead to a desired achievements.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, i profoundly believe that by different facts and figures no one admires you if you are a determinant towards your path.
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree) 11
- give an example of an accomplished person whose success didn't have any effect on his bad neighborhood.many people think that regions affect a successful person. what is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person influence on the region 85
- It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. To what extent do you agree to disagree? 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...both successful and improved lifestyle. Although, the there are also certain fundamental...
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Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...condly, those who probably believe that these sort of people can be effected by spoiled so...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'achievement'?
Suggestion: achievement
...iety, this eventually lead to a desired achievements. To conclude, while there are severa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57347670251 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38967302604 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5685562202 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.363636364 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388108788109 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113299160903 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967075350782 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186200244931 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120302304222 0.0609392437508 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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