Nowadays, renowned persons or celebrities are irrefutably the fundamental assets of our society. They apparently are the great and reliable source of inspiration for anyone. That’s why I am completely in support with this notion.
From the psychological standpoint, the people are vigorously affected by infinite factors, one prominent and undeniable influencing factor is from other people, such as, their lifestyle, communication ways, hairstyle, dressing, personal vehicles, etc. Similarly, celebrities and well-known successful sports personnel are more influencing because their appearance effects abruptly to anyone.
Celebrities also sparks enthusiasm and determination as well as motivation. As a remarkable example, a longitudinal study conducted by the group of eminent scientists in recent years, demonstrates the relation between a famous successful person who was from a middle-class family and lived his early life by kith and kin. The research was fascinating and investigated how he becomes a rich man. According to them he was only motivated and inspired by a legendary artist who admired him throughout his career.
This is not only about by pros and cons about how they are inspired, it is the decision of a person’s success, personal development, goal achievement as well as his happiness. But, unfortunately, some believe that people are not inspired from role models which eventually is not worthwhile.
To conclude, as from the aforementioned discussions, there are several arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that successful person or celebrity always inspires and admires us by any means.
- It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. To what extent do you agree to disagree? 88
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree) 11
- give an example of an accomplished person whose success didn't have any effect on his bad neighborhood.many people think that regions affect a successful person. what is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person influence on the region 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ersonal development, goal achievement as well as his happiness. But, unfortunatel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, similarly, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76229508197 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31604740381 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668032786885 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9698113657 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0730194034665 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269428720997 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273308038002 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408948143414 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182436150813 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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