government should reduce the investment
It is important to reduce the investment in arts, music and painting, which rises the inclination of people towards the belief that is good for student.others, however including i , Harbour the that i completely disagree with this statement. i will discuss my views in the upcoming paragraph.
To address the, advantage of reduce investment in arts, music and painting. It is crucial to understand to factors government should invest the money in other subject. Initially, it is widely seen hat nowadays mos of student prefer to mathematics and science subject which is very beneficial for them because these subjects are very helpful for various way of their life.Not only it helps related to their study but also, it is very helpful for doing any job.
On the other hand, arts, music and painting subjects are not useful in their life but they think these subjects are wastage of time. furthermore, government should invest the money on science subject rather than invest on music and painting. As when student are read science and other subject they learn many skills in their life which will prove themselves long run in the future.
To epitomize indeed, students also not much interested in painting and music subjects so, government should invest the money on science and mathematics subjects as these subjects are much helpful in their life and they also not face any difficulty in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... for student.others, however including i , Harbour the that i completely disagree ...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ompletely disagree with this statement. i will discuss my views in the upcoming p...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ompletely disagree with this statement. i will discuss my views in the upcoming p...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...in the upcoming paragraph. To address the, advantage of reduce investment in arts,...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'factor'.
Suggestion: factor
...ainting. It is crucial to understand to factors government should invest the money in o...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ause these subjects are very helpful for various way of their life.Not only it he...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
... helpful for various way of their life.Not only it helps related to their study bu...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ink these subjects are wastage of time. furthermore, government should invest the money on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03433476395 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59506941581 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50643776824 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0837744704 50.4703680194 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234952314267 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135744276298 0.0925447433944 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14464859109 0.071462118173 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151705533142 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319123597084 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.