Governments promise continuous economic growth, but it is actually an illusion. Some people think that governments should abandon this. Please talk about the validity and implications.
Nowadays, whether governments have kept their promises to develop economy in a continuous approach, and embrace it or not, has sparked a heated debate. Although, contested by many that governments failed to complete their commitments, such issue is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that governments have made progress in developing economies continuously, and I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, globalization has made this promise hard to fulfill as the world becomes an integrated system that every country’s economy is tightly linked to one another, instead of being simply controlled by its own government. However, economic growth has been achieved throughout the years. For instance, the report from Ministry of economic Affairs has shown an increased GDP and the raised of personal living standard in the past five years. Hence, economic growth and citizen’s living standard have maintained and enhanced.
Furthermore, economic growth in any country is closely linked to single household’s financial condition, which can never be neglected under all circumstances. In fact, research shows that growing economy brings employment opportunities and better infrastructures. These improvements ensure stable income for individuals, as well as better working environment for both employers and employees. Thus, ensuring a continuous economic growth is crucial for both individuals and society.
In conclusion, as globalization links individual countries’ economies together, it is crucial for governments to continuously updating relevant policies internally and enhancing international relations externally in order to maintain a continuous economic growth that provides a sustainable development to its own citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03759398496 5.00649968141 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40933297869 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5189822199 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185387425485 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067230587776 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397813924132 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10904684177 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240508481024 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 18.1 12.6369458128 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 53.1260098522 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 11.5310837438 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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