I an Lakhwinder Singh. I am a banker. I am post graduate with master computer application. I started my job in dec 2014 with sales officer grade. After three years work i proved himself and permotted by AXIS bank as a assistant manager.

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I an Lakhwinder Singh. I am a banker. I am post graduate with master computer application. I started my job in dec 2014 with sales officer grade. After three years work i proved himself and permotted by AXIS bank as a assistant manager.

I an Lakhwinder Singh. I am a banker. I am post graduate with master computer application. I started my job in dec 2014 with sales officer grade. After three years work i proved himself and permotted by AXIS bank as a assistant manager.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
I an Lakhwinder Singh. I am a banker. I am p...
^^
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
I an Lakhwinder Singh. I am a banker. I am p...
^^
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I an Lakhwinder Singh. I am a banker. I am post graduate with master computer a...
^
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...duate with master computer application. I started my job in dec 2014 with sales o...
^
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s officer grade. After three years work i proved himself and permotted by AXIS ba...
^
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d himself and permotted by AXIS bank as a assistant manager.
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.5418719212 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 31.9359605911 16% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 194.0 1207.87684729 16% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 43.0 242.827586207 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51162790698 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.56074960203 3.92707691288 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79843887563 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 36.0 139.433497537 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.837209302326 0.580463131201 144% => OK
syllable_count: 61.2 379.143842365 16% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 8.0 20.5024630542 39% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9636792742 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 38.8 104.977214359 37% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.6 20.9669160288 41% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.25397266985 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 1.0 0.242375264174 413% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.354939437539 0.0925447433944 384% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992545545541 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 1.0 0.151781067708 659% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 12.6369458128 32% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.28 53.1260098522 151% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.1 10.9458128079 37% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.81 11.5310837438 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 55.0591133005 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.94827586207 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.3980295567 50% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.5123152709 38% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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