Ramandeep sharma is my wife. she is very nice girl. i love her so much. because she have very good nature. she has a soft heart.

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Ramandeep sharma is my wife. she is very nice girl. i love her so much. because she have very good nature. she has a soft heart.

Ramandeep Sharma is my wife. she is very nice girl. i love her so much. because she have very good nature. she has a soft heart.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
Ramandeep Sharma is my wife. she is very nice girl. i love her so much. ...
^^^
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...arma is my wife. she is very nice girl. i love her so much. because she have very...
^
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...arma is my wife. she is very nice girl. i love her so much. because she have very...
^
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... is very nice girl. i love her so much. because she have very good nature. she has a so...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is very nice girl. i love her so much. because she have very good nature. she has a so...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e girl. i love her so much. because she have very good nature. she has a soft heart....
^^^^
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...uch. because she have very good nature. she has a soft heart.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 8.36945812808 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 31.9359605911 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 103.0 1207.87684729 9% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 26.0 242.827586207 11% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.96153846154 5.00649968141 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.25810086435 3.92707691288 58% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 1.89088439281 2.71678728327 70% => OK
Unique words: 22.0 139.433497537 16% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.846153846154 0.580463131201 146% => OK
syllable_count: 35.1 379.143842365 9% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 5.0 20.5024630542 24% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 5.4918120871 50.4703680194 11% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 20.6 104.977214359 20% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 5.2 20.9669160288 25% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.2 7.25397266985 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 1.0 0.242375264174 413% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.41646968679 0.0925447433944 450% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126865030495 0.071462118173 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 1.0 0.151781067708 659% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: -0.2 12.6369458128 -2% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.32 53.1260098522 157% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.9 10.9458128079 26% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 1.54 11.5310837438 13% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.71 8.32886699507 69% => OK
difficult_words: 3.0 55.0591133005 5% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 1.5 9.94827586207 15% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.0 10.3980295567 38% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 2.0 10.5123152709 19% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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