If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose?
In this day and age, the heated topic of climate change has become even more controversial the world over. In this regard, if I were given a chance to study climate change, I would put my efforts on the issue of greenhouse gases as one of the underlying causes of this phenomenon and the corresponding solutions to tackle this problem. This will be discussed in this essay.
For one, greenhouses are claimed to be the most significant factor for climate change. Therefore, if I had the chance to start my academic field of study, I would dedicate myself to the issue of greenhouse gases, and to be specific, the issue of carbon dioxide emissions. Since this has been known as the most influencing factor to climate change and considering my own interest in chemistry, it is now quite evident why I would rather study this subject.
In addition to this, as an engineer, I am personally dealing with various problems of chemistry in my professional life on a daily basis, and I am considering myself as a creative and agile problem solver. On the other hand, climate change issues should be brought to the fore and taken care of instantly and without hesitation. So, I could have been resourceful and insightful, if I had studied and become familiar with the topic of greenhouse gases.
To recapitulate, after analyzing the reasons on the issue of climate change, it is felt that the subject of carbon dioxide emission and the appropriate solutions could be a convenient subject to satisfy my scientific curiosity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86153846154 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8530581537 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530769230769 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3612255419 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108236358266 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484055593696 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337970382634 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750744398008 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277552027216 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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