Individuals today have more information about health than at any time in the past Yet people are increasingly suffering from fitness and diet releated diseases

Essay topics:

Individuals today have more information about health than at any time in the past. Yet, people are increasingly suffering from fitness- and diet
releated diseases.

The present generation has access to the internet and lot of information. But still it is sad to hear that the present generation faces lot of fitness and diet releated diseases.This essay covers most of the important features on why the present generation is affected with most of the health related diseases and also highlights on how this can be prevented.

One of the main reason why the present generation are facing fitness and diet related diseases is because they lack in doing physical activities and exercises.Mind is also relatively stressed. So, in a simple words both body and mind are getting affected.Another notable point is the present generation follows poor lifestyle by taking more and more junk foods which inturn causes serious effectsboth on body and mind.

The present generation can safegaurd themeselves by doing daily exercises and routines. People should also engage themselves in more and morephysical and outdoor activities and try to keep their body slim and fit.The other way to prevent theselves from diseases is by taking proper diet. Proper diet means taking balanced and nutrituous diet.People should completely avoid taking junk foods. We should also keep our mind calm and serene try to be stress free all the time. This can be achieved by doing proper yoga exercises.

In conclusion, the present generation should use proper use of information and tools and try to adhere good lifestyle.
Phyical exercises and taking proper heathy diet is need of the hour and young generation should follow it seriously.

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Average: 7.7 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19521912351 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78879339737 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545816733068 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0293851425 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132262352165 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490103173127 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459926340042 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673752454211 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342611076869 0.0609392437508 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...t of fitness and diet releated diseases.This essay covers most of the important feat...
^^^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Mind
...doing physical activities and exercises.Mind is also relatively stressed. So, in a s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...both body and mind are getting affected.Another notable point is the present generation...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...and try to keep their body slim and fit.The other way to prevent theselves from dis...
^^^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...ans taking balanced and nutrituous diet.People should completely avoid taking junk foo...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19521912351 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78879339737 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545816733068 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0293851425 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132262352165 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490103173127 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459926340042 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673752454211 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342611076869 0.0609392437508 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.