recently, the phenomenon of the information revolution and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that changing the mass communication is highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the effects of information revolution can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree with the changes that have taken place in mass communication. At first, the existence of information can enable some people to misuse them. However, the information revolution has helped people to get to their necessary information sooner. For example, the facilities such as the Internet provide reaching to information easier than before.
In addition, The Internet has helped to hackers to damage computer systems, which can be a negative. But, access to free information increased the level of public knowledge among people. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2014 has shown that a significant number of people became more aware of their world after the advent of the Internet.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite the all abusements of information that accomplished by abusers, the benefits of information revolution are far outweighed their drawbacks.
- Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.'To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons andexamples from your own experience. 80
- “The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education”- Einstein. What does he mean by that? And do you agree with his statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 77
- An increasing number of people choose to study and work in big cities. What are advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? 78
- computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society.How far do you agree with this statement? 56
- It is said that for some developed countries, tourism may cause some disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading. 85
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54666666667 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16519966019 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5287055144 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.454545455 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182200327561 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649951954423 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395173994892 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104073417586 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629618280775 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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