In this day and age devices produced by last technologies became the essential home appliances in advanced countries, Although living beside this devices
became more convinced than before but some people these technologies made our life wrapped and less free time.
In this essay, I would discuss how living is easier and homework can be done faster with this gadgets.
To begin with, there are various reason to support advantages of labor-saving devices and using them.
First and foremost, the speed of access to information and communication whit family members or friends is very simple in this houses.
For example, despite home computers and internet, the connection with relatives on the other side of the world and also access
to information is incredibly simple and feasible
secondly, since the appearance of types of furniture such as vacuum cleaner, washing machine and dishwasher, do not need to hair a worker
for homework, even for persons that have not a lot of time to doing these works.
For instance, a recent scientific research conducted with Tehran University researchers in 2015 shown that almost all of employed people
in the middle class do their own homework by above-mentioned technologies.
In conclusion, there are several compelling reasons to convince people to use last computer technologies in their homes.
my personal sentiment is that using modern gadgets make our life convenient and works can be done faster.
- computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society.How far do you agree with this statement? 77
- Life experience is a better teacher than school or foreign education. Give an example and support opinion. 85
- Some people work for long hours and hard to achieve success and some give importance to free time for them. Give your opinion and discuss your views. 77
- With the development of technology and science, some people believe that there is no great value of artists such as musicians and painters. What are the things artists can do but the scientist cannot? Why should we encourage the art area? 77
- Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals so real change can only be achieved at government level.' To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own exp 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33189655172 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82192650039 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659482758621 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.889339482 50.4703680194 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.625 104.977214359 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.25397266985 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131843671982 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508653192635 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377285238658 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410463976413 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360689454797 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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