Is it advisable to spend money on space exploration rather than issues like eradicating poverty? Discuss
It has been debatable among social groups about government budget in developed countries whether supporting space exploration means poverty is neglected. While space exploration aims to advance human civilisation, getting rid of poverty provides equity access to people who struggle to fulfil basic needs. In this essay, the importance of investing in space travel will be examined.
The space industry has progressed a number of advanced science and technology in the last decades through sending orbiting satellites and spacecraft to the Earth’s orbit and beyond. The results of the exploration helped engineers and scientists to further improve technology which elevate human’s lives in many aspects. One of them was the visibility into agricultural lands from space, which helped an institution like the United Nations in food production planning for poverty.
Another reason why space travel should be supported financially is chemical element or mineral discovery. Novel elements that exist in the universe may enhance the utility of current and limited natural resources, which largely accounted for government spending. These resources, if effectively planned, can allow the tight budget to be used more on the accessibility of human basic needs.
All in all, these two areas, ending poverty and space travel, should not be seen as competing against one another to receive funding. The technology emerged from studying the celestial structure, has been a significant part in closing the poverty gap, although indirectly and lengthy. The outcomes of both actions lead to the advancing human civilisation and intelligence to solve other pressing problems on the planet Earth.
- Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 89
- Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 89
- Is it advisable to spend money on space exploration rather than issues like eradicating poverty? Discuss 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65234375 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86517246546 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66796875 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9138285397 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.25397266985 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138015790992 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478713675473 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379766644644 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813457820281 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502199965942 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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