Recently, the phenomenon of marrying before finishing school or getting a job and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that getting married can be highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that ending up studying and finding a good job can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree that getting married before finishing school is not a good choice. At first, it is the vital need for everyone to have a mate in his life. However, marrying in education could make many problems for both couples. For example, the issues such as financial problems could make living hard.
In addition, the marriage is beneficial for the emotion of the students. But, these students do not have enough time for their studies and it influences on their learning and grades. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2017 has shown that a significant number of married students have lower grades in their lessons than other unmarried students.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about marry in early ages, I profoundly believe that despite all advantages of marriage, the drawbacks of marrying before graduation are far its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19469026549 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83749439161 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6458057948 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.727272727 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254772101421 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973382378652 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137089079504 0.071462118173 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136554352749 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840777374413 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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