Recently, the phenomenon of the pقoblems placed against the governments and orgشnizations around the world, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that solving the problems by the earth's inhabitants can be beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly devastating and negative by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that these issues are hard to be solved by people alone, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various problems that governments are facing to them. At first, the environmental problems such as the air pollution and the pollution of underground waters are some of the issues that only can be solved by the governmental efforts. For example, for the air pollution, the public transportation development and encouraging people to less using of the personal cars can be influential to reduce the main cause of climate change.
In addition, increasing the population is another main problem that the governments are facing it. It can be the cause of agricultural as well as food supply issues for the human in the future. The government should make programs in the mass media to enhance the culture of birth among people to reduce the results of increasing the population.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite the presence of all people in the environmental problems, the governmental power can only find solutions for these issues.
- The violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. people who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree? 80
- Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 80
- It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree? 72
- Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 77
- school children nowadays are not playing more sports compared to their parents in their childhood Do you agree or disagree support your ideas with examples 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25203252033 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09159102915 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556910569106 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1218892145 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.2 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153418593374 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648226393076 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411788074942 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923114212793 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280450316045 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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