It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Young age marriages are becoming increasingly popular these days. Some people are in favour of marriages at a young age, even before completion of education but other people are against it. This essay will discuss what are the disadvantages of marrying before completing the studies.
To begin with, marrying brings many responsibilities including fulfilling the financial requirements of the family. Expenses are significantly increased because of extended family and it becomes stressful to manage these expenses and at the start of the career or being unemployed may worsen the condition. For example, my brother married at a young age but he was not able to complete his studies and now, because of his under qualification he earns a limited amount of money only, which have made him a depression patient. Therefore, a person should get married after completing his studies.
Secondly, immaturity may be devastating for the relationship. People are not mature at the time of education as they are not aware of the real issues in life and marrying at that time can result in misunderstanding between the couples which can damage their relationships making children suffer also. For instance, according to a survey in America, more divorce rates are witnessed among people who marry at a young age. Thus, it is essential that marriage should take place after spending some time in practical life.
In conclusion, the early marriages can cause financial stress and it damage the relationships because of immaturity. In my opinion, a person should get married after completing his education and spending some time shaping his career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ir relationships making children suffer also. For instance, according to a survey in...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'damages'?
Suggestion: damages
...iages can cause financial stress and it damage the relationships because of immaturity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27099236641 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97682764469 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4265424284 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0905362637552 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382505783698 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470140688884 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061222744679 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203038722854 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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