it is argued that getting married before finishing their school or getting a job is not a good choice.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people doing jobs to pay their bills before finish their schooling. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that people getting marriage and getting jobs before finishing their school can not only contribute to enhance the standard of their life but also provides their utilities and rents. They feel mature and more responsible in their early age. Thanks to a wide range of advantages being offered by people are doing jobs before finishing their school, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective but also enhance their productivity and standard of their life with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needleless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead. As far as, augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can one broaden their horizons. Thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of before finishing their schools people are getting marriage and doing jobs.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that, the benefits of people getting married and doing jobs before finishing their school are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90747330961 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65069377334 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526690391459 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2132925396 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296171255171 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101124488869 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113210234229 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204294937893 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706267043843 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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