It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice . To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Ever since the twenty-first century took place, there has been a colossal upsurge in the debate of getting married and getting a job before finishing school. Some intellectuals assert it is not a choice, while others say that it is not a good choice. I disagree with the given statement. I will discuss my view points in my upcoming paragraphs.
To set the wheels into motion, there are multifarious reasons behind in this statement. Primarily, the most evident and distinctive one stem from the fact is that when people getting a marriage or getting a job before finishing school they don't focus on their career. They are only spend time with their family and on work. Secondly, another underlying, salient and remarkable feature is that people have don't knowledge so people are don't successful in their life.
To put more emphasis on it, i believe that getting married before finishing school or getting a job they spend money according their needs. However, there are some finical problems behind it. If they have finical problems they don't focus on their study and on their career. They are don't successful in their life.
To encapsulate, after the pinpointing and bolstering all the points above it is crystal clear getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. People cannot success in their life and when people good lack of knowledge and skills they success in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96666666667 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5458265139 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3560877707 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1428571429 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258215320802 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923242755522 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138375624052 0.071462118173 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186037308942 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050157028947 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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