It is believed that universities should enroll men and women in equal numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past, man was the protector and decision maker in the home. Women were limited to domestic matters such as looking after the home and raising children. Further, they had lower literacy level due to limited education and limited freedom. Moreover they did not travel independently whilst they haven't freedom to make their own decisions. It was the purely a male dominated era. On the other hand women in the past were not affected by globalization and cultural influence.
Dramatically, in this rapidly evolving era with the performance of education, knowledge, business, communication, science and technology standards of rapidly increased and continue to change. Moreover, Children by both men and women having same educational leading to equal employment opportunities. However society's outlook towards women has now changed. Presently, women have reached equal and greater hights than men specially, in the developing and developed countries whilst they are able to make their own decisions without male pressure. Women in massive countries now have even entered in to dangerous professions.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with this statement because global conflics and economic pressure are affecting every home. In the future as more and more women venture in to higher education and demanding careers. Thus changing the entire family structure in these process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54716981132 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86239536521 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1681571985 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110717090853 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351287581792 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382368612747 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680678394595 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393586218652 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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