It is believed that universities should enroll men and women in equal numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past, man was the protector and decision maker in the home. Women were limited to domestic matters such as looking after the home and raising children. Further, they had lower literacy level due to limited education and limited freedom. Moreover they did not travel independently whilst they haven't had freedom to make their own decisions. It was purely a male dominated era. On the other hand women in the past were not affected by globalization and cultural influence.
Dramatically, in this rapidly evolving era with the advancement of education, knowledge, business, communication, science and technology standards were rapidly increased and continue to change. Moreover, both men and women having same educational qualification which will leading to have equal employment opportunities. However society's outlook towards women has now changed. Presently, women have reached equal or greater heights than men specially, in the developing and developed countries whilst they are able to make their own decisions without pressure by male. Women in massive countries now have even entered in to dangerous and heroic professions.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with this statement because global conflics and economic pressure are affecting every home. In the future as more and more women venture in to higher education and demanding careers. Thus changing the entire family structure in during these process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...limited education and limited freedom. Moreover they did not travel independently whils...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...id not travel independently whilst they havent had freedom to make their own decisions...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...to have equal employment opportunities. However societys outlook towards women has now ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54128440367 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8642849789 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665137614679 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1315866333 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106740864845 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332758774023 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341896353533 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652507541067 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363947627041 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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