Over the past few years, old buildings and heritages form an important part of any country and its the responsibility of government to maintain and rebuild such structures. Many people think that it's a waste of money and time in managing them, while others maintain that its essential to preserve such structures. In my opinion, it's vital to preserve and protect such amazing properties, even if it is expensive.
At the outset, there are a number of reasons to maintain such buildings, but the most preponderant one's lies in the fact that it boasts the thick cultural heritage and legacy of a country. Our ancestors have spent great energy and time in constructing those buildings which showcase the meaning and culture of an era. In addition to this, those buildings would bring a great amount of money through tourism. As a tangible example, a study conducted by the University of Columbia reveals that 67% of revenue from tourism in India comes from the cultural heritage sites. Furthermore, retaining and maintaining such buildings is a pathway of handing over our rich legacy to future generations.
On the contrary, some people consider this as an additional expenditure and burden, but such apprehension is purely unintellectual and insane as the benefits outweigh any meagre drawbacks which may proffer. These people are unaware that these old buildings truly showcases the identity of a nation and exposing it would bring a greater amount of revenue than actually spending in maintaining it.
In conclusion, heritage buildings are significant in the development and culture of any nation.in my opinion, it should be of paramount consideration of concerned authorities to preserve and maintain these buildings at any cost.
- It is important to maintain and protect beautiful buildings of the past, even if it is expensive for owners to do so. What do you think of this statement. Give reasons and examples from your own experience. 77
- Nowadays, the bickering has common trend amongst youngsters and married people. This has led polygamy and high divorce rates. Justify the response with your positive or negative views. 77
- It is important to maintain and protect beautiful buildings of the past, even if it is expensive for owners to do so. What do you think of this statement. Give reasons and examples from your own experience. 77
- Nowadays, the bickering has common trend amongst youngsters and married people. This has led polygamy and high divorce rates. Justify the response with your positive or negative views. 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, may, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.225 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95950345739 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7696115182 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12902629582 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516438503641 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0191116811054 0.071462118173 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748727851767 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023839636195 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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