In this day and age, they are really stupid, those people who think of marriage before graduation and finding a good job. Although marriage regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive action for life by a considerable number of people, there is not entirely an agreement in this case among people. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this topic.
To begin with, there are various reasons to oppose marriage before ending studies and getting established in a proper job. First and foremost, it is impossible for the students to afford living expenditure such as rent cost, paying the bills and etc. In my experience, in university, I knew a married student that always was protesting about his problems and in the end left their studies unfinished.
Secondly, the married students have not enough time for their living or studies. By spending time with family and solving issues of the home they lose time for studying and get a low score in lessons. For example, a recent scientific research conducted by Tehran University researchers shows that a significant number of married students have lower grades than other students.
In conclusion, while the marriage is an admired act and beneficial for people's living, my personal sentiment is that it can be possible after graduation and finding a suitable job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03587443946 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70690861687 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632286995516 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2044196197 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154648721175 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628819527222 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700203165826 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840330848874 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497779731913 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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