People usually mix their private and professional life. What are the pros and cons of this?
Recently, the phenomenon of mixing the private side of people's lives with the professional side and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that attending to professional life is highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that abstracting the private and professional side of living time can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss the mixed life of private side and pro side. At first, paying much to professional task could help to future positions in our job. However, the disadvantage of professional life is having lower time for the family in special times such as travel and country trips.
In addition, the professional life will have a negative effect on emotion. for instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of people hwo spend a lot of time in work are more involved with emotional diseases such as depressing and gloomy.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that despite the importance of professional life to make good future for own family, the drawbacks of mixed living is far outweighed its benefits.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18834080717 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02766640503 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1232234875 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.555555556 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248148329595 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103285563231 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445883118264 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146957500359 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455904375355 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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