it's difficult to maintain the balance between work and other aspects of life such as family and leisure time, what is your opinion to keep it balanced.
Recently, the phenomenon of spending too much time at work and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of keeping the balance between job and family is highly important, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that having time for personal life can be a plus, and I will analyze that by providing some academic evidence before concluding.
From a social standpoint, being a hard-work as well as a knowledgable and professional worker can provide the society with some noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that job satisfaction and working conditions are extremely bound up. According to an academic survey conducted by Tehran University, providing a balance between work hours and spending time with friends and family is of importance. Thus, the beneficial ramification of the working environment and personal healthy life apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, working under pressure without spending time for leisure and sport might increase the consequences of depression. Moreover, there are some opponents of hard working which support their idea through some valid logic. Based on some academic research provided by a prestigious institute, innovation and bight idea can only be brought from a peaceful mind. However, keeping a balance between work and private life could bring many beneficial aspects for both employee and employer.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that although some people tend to think that spending so many time on work could be a way to improve life condition, I profoundly believe that providing a reasonable balance between work and leisure activities is more important for a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37192982456 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95243090707 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4152627504 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.181818182 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241919305151 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970940640233 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063880758536 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159714837567 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0098241499692 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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