it's difficult to maintenance the balance between work and other aspects of life such as family and leisure time, what is your opinion to keep it balanced.
Recently, the phenomenon of balancing works with other activities of life and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of the happy life is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that free times can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, leisure time can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of working conditions, as well as the working time, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered balancing daily activities. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both leisure activities and the rest time apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, the role of a family might increase the consequences of family time. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of the extended family could relate to this reality that the demerits of close family pertain to working full time. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of wasting times is correlated negatively with professional life. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of the quality of life.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of life expectancy far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of balancing work hours prove the significance of the personal life, but also pinpoint spending more times with family implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rits of close family pertain to working full time. As a tangible example, some scientific...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06976270625 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625925925926 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3985159055 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265788827308 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882688706674 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504592281444 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150001561603 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238511180083 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.