It's difficult to maintenance the balance between work and other aspects of life shush as family and leisure time, what is your opinion to keep it balanced.
Recently, the phenomenon of balancing the time which is allocated for working and the other aspects of life including the spare time for relaxing or being with families, relatives and friends and its coressponding impacts has sparked a heated debate among the populations. Although this idea is beneficial as it is regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, some difficulties cannot create it. I am incliend to belive that dwellers should have this balance in their life which is quite essential for their living.
From a social standpoint, there are several reasons why inhabitants should have a balance in devoting their time which is spending for working and being with families or relaxing. These reasons are rooted in the fact of enjoyment. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these issues. Firstly, families should have plan for their budjet in order to allocate sufficient money for all aspects of their life. Financial problems can alter the balancing time and leads to having more working hours. Furthermore, they should diminish their unnecessary cost and spend their money based on meeting the priorities.
In addition, citizens should find well-paid jobs by enhancing their knowledge and expertise in order to earn adequate income to meet their needs. Moreover, parents should consider an array of aspects to be at work including their children's upbringing and the health issues. Supporting the families is not just a simple monetary issue and need to providing some other paramount issues including being, talking and laughing with them.
In conclusion, while there are several arguments on allocating relatively the same time for working and being with the families, I profoundly belive that everyone must balance it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...e issues. Firstly, families should have plan for their budjet in order to allocate s...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'need to provide'?
Suggestion: need to provide
...is not just a simple monetary issue and need to providing some other paramount issues including b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37457044674 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78310208783 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3323087067 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153942194707 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585479420276 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545262944414 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10101186109 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271147992533 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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