Employers should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss
Recently, the phenomenon of involving employyes in management debates and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although this idea is beneficial as it regarded by the substantial numbers of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that it can be a plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several advantages of encouraging employees to engage in debates and offer their own ideas. These are rooted in the fact of enhancing productivity. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these benefits. Firstly, this allowance is considered as a kind of attention by the workers and make a feel of satisfaction among them. Furthermore, their confidence is boosted by anticipating in the discussions and they always try to think about all issues in their jobs, hence, their unconsideration feeling is killed by this decision and their efficiency is enhanced. Moreover, an array of problems and technical issues are difficult to recognize by employers, and this idea helps to find and address them in the fast way.
On the one hand, there is no doubt, the idea of motivating employees to attend debates in order to offer the new ideas and suggestion has some opponents. These people asserted that this involving lead to reveal all problems for employees and they aquire a lot more information about the weaknesses. Thus, this kind of information is danger for market competitions, if someone submit it to the rivals.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of psych up employees to think about their job issues and try to make suugestion are more outweigh its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'submits'.
Suggestion: submits
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19798657718 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06286879621 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.843959679 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0683617806824 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228945805764 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335065741858 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0409526875428 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027426932038 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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