keeping animal in zoos and animal rights
Recently , the phenomenon of conserving animals has sparked a heated debate . Although contested by many that the mater of ecological balance is highly beneficial , such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals . I am inclined to beleive that pet therapy can be a plus , and i will analyze that throughout this essay .
From asocial standpoint , big zoos can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of the pet shop as well as the pet ownership , are inextricably bound up . according to my own experience when i was a university student , i performed an academic expirment , which discovered local extintion . Thus , beneficail ramifications of both animal lovers and animal trial apparently can be seen .
Within the realm of science , natural zoos might increase the consequences of animal behavior . moreover , fundamental aspects of a pet owner could relate to this reality that the downside of animal liberation is correlated negatively to the rights of livestock . hence , it is correct to presume the perconcieved notion of living creatures .
To conclude ,while there are several compelling arguments on both sides , i profoundly beleive that the benefits of untatural zoos far outweight its drawbacks . Not only do the advantages of natural habitat prove the significance of endangered animals , but also pinpoint fundamental protections implications .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46875 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17831727529 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8217524085 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.363636364 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.33497536946 619% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283427051177 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974522112475 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097387809967 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1575136878 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700844652974 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.