Is tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage? Discuss your views and give your opinion.
Recently, the phenomenon of tourism industry and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of complex procedures is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to beleive that less developed countries can be a plus, and i will analyze that throughout this essay .
From a general standpoint, tourism advocates can provide the society with some noticeable effets which are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up . According to my own experience , when i was a university student, i performed an academic expirement which discovered current policies. thus, beneficial ramifications of both this common phenomenon and accordingly complicated procedures apparently can be seen .
Within the real of public arena, tourism opponents might increase the consequences of critical needs. as a tangible example , some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively with vital issues . hence, it is correct to presume the preconcieved notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, i profoundly beleive that the benefits of developing countries far outweight its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint throny issues' potential implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77155172414 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31184937055 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681034482759 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1744581651 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.33497536946 619% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877831185071 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313591707589 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369483964702 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527820455727 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326797599296 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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