Shopping malls have become an integral part of a rising debate in the present world. While proponents of the argument are in favour, however, the opponents are completely against the relevance of having shopping malls in place of small local shops. In my opinion, having shopping malls replace small local shops has more positive impacts than negatives around the globe.
To commence with, there are several arguments in the favour of my belief. The most prominent one is that the shopping malls provide the citizens of the town with more exposure to popular brands and trends. According to research conducted by Royal Melbourne Institute of Technology, the people visiting shopping malls had better dressing sense and ideas on what's trending, than people going to small local shops and repeating the same trend. Secondly, the small local shops also can get benefitted by moving in the shopping mall as it attracts more audience thus increasing sales and revenue.
On the other hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant disadvantages of having shopping malls is that it affects small businesses sales and revenue and provides more to big brands. For instance, a survey conducted in India reveals that people started ditching local shops in favour of big brands as soon as a shopping mall opened near them.
To conclude, even when there are numerous demerits associated with having shopping malls in cities, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and shopping malls have become a crucial part of our life. Therefore, shopping malls should be promoted, while also providing prominent spaces to small businesses in them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2030075188 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55420074241 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8548079573 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393512922292 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174907329244 0.0925447433944 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838817083124 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267885312051 0.151781067708 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542888532252 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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