Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Large shopping malls are replacing small shops and trend of small shops is fading away. In recent years, it is seen that many clothing brands and even grocery stores are opening in malls and shopping malls are also increasing rapidly. There is ongoing debate on this matter that whether malls are beneficial or not. In my opinion malls are quite convinient but small shops have there own positive points.
Malls are helpful in many ways, one can have different kind of things in one roof. Moreover, there is proper security there as comapre to small shops because malls have proper parking for vehicles and we can deposit our valuables there before shopping. However, smalls shops have their own customers who cannot afford to go to malls, they can buy product at reasonable prices, so I am not totally against the small shops.
Furthermore, large malls have vast variety of shops and there are food courts and children play zone also where families can enjoy there outing and eat together. Malls are playing vital role in increasing business of import and exports as there are many foreign brands which are investing on having showrooms in malls and this is giving great hipe to the economy of the country. Malls are also providng different kind of employment like security guards, helpers and salesman etc.
In conclusion, it is quite obvious that malls are really beneficial for shoping and spending time with familis and they also boost the economy of the country, meanwhile we cannot ignore small shops as they have there own value for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: their own
... cannot ignore small shops as they have there own value for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92803030303 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24188350872 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.409223817 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321366278689 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140914267355 0.0925447433944 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113346578093 0.071462118173 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203570563996 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119915312279 0.0609392437508 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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