Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Sustainability of small shops is at threat because of consistently growing mall culture. In the recent past, malls have swept away many small shops in urban areas. It could be arguable to comment that small shops are being replaced by large malls; however, I strongly believe in this.
The popularity of malls is evident from the increasing rate at which they attract consumers with their ambiance, one-stop shopping venue and other facilities. The small shops cannot provide such wide-range of comforts to its customers and hence are not able to cope up with competition; consequently, they are disappearing from the market. In my own city, I have witnessed closing down of 15 small shops because they were abandoned for the same reasons.
Additionally, malls are more logistically oriented when compared to small shops. The goods distribution department of manufacturers feel a great deal of ease to drop the variety of their products at one place, rather than going to each shop one by one. According to the distribution head of one of the most prestigious company, they find it more economical and less challenging to showcase their entire product range under one roof.
To conclude, from consumers' and distributors' perspective the malls are better places to have a great shopping experience and they also provide more convenience ;as a result, small retailers are being avoided. Therefore, I consummately agree that small shops are being replaced by large malls.
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- Urban sprawl is an increasing issue around the world One way in which to solve this issue is to construct cities vertically rather than horizontally 53
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goods'' or 'good's'?
Suggestion: goods'; good's
...ented when compared to small shops. The goods distribution department of manufacturer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88959877646 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1180662329 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.636363636 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244160018807 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109416969212 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622660322666 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158516640303 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701797398721 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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