Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
These days there is an ongoing debate between the people who believe that large shopping malls are replacing small shops, but some people think in an opposite way. In my opinion, small shops are being replaced by shopping malls as customer can purchase many things at one place. I shall be providing my viewpoint after analyzing both sides of the aspect.
Firstly, these days people dont have much time to spend on shopping, so they prefer most of the things to be purchased at one place, and the best place is shopping mall. In addition to this, malls attract customer by providing lucrative offers as malls purchase goods at a whole sale price. Secondly, shopping malls are good for country growth as they generate employment by keeping people on job. Thirdly, there are many malls who have ample amount of parking which helps customer to park their vehicle easily.
On the other hand, small shops have limited variety of products and the owners of these shops have to buy products from middle-man. This results in providing less or no discounts on the products kept in small shops. Hence people prefer shopping malls instead of small shops.
In conclusion, government should encourage more and more shopping malls as they are good for country growth and people get more discount or offers by purchasing these products.
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...or offers by purchasing these products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95089285714 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31282316413 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.943333869 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.818181818 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.25397266985 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246682317986 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109032933119 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744291132314 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155337989254 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753651174202 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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