The world is undergoing the largest wave of urban growth in history. Due to this, innumerable change can be seen in the cities. Chiefly, big-big malls have been grown which are substituting small shops. I personally feel that expanding malls is beneficial. In subsequent paragraphs, I will discuss both pros and cons of replacing small shops by the malls.
To begin with the advantages, there can be many advantages of replacing small shops by the large shopping malls. Firstly, malls provide everything under a roof. For example, cinemas, play stations for children, restaurants and numerous shops so that people prefer mall as compared to small shops. Secondly, shopping malls provide different offers on the shopping which attracts more to individuals which are not common to be seen in small local shops.
On the flip side, due to the raising of the number of malls, the adverse effect can be seen on economic of small shopkeepers and their inherent arts: many small shops, specially handcraft and traditional clothes, in local areas are forcing to close because of the lack of customers; For instance, around 60% of small handcraft item shops have been closed, and sell of Khadi clothes in India has decreased by 60-70% due to fewer sales. Probing further, sometimes these huge malls and shopping centers create traffic problems in the markets due to lack of parking and the huge crowd on weekends.
In the nutshell, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that the benefits of malls outweigh the small retailers, however, if government decrease the tax on the local small retailers, so that, they can attract customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12313432836 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62141936678 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.567577241 50.4703680194 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292207092955 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108129334767 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067750695865 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17734029249 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727391121182 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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