In the human life, the law plays an extremely important role. It controls the human behaviour and emotions. On the contrary, some people think that it does not affect so much, rather, depends on self-commitment of a person. I personally feel that laws alter the human conducts positively. In the subsequent paragraph, I will explain both agreement and disagreement side of the above statement.
To begin with the agreement, there are so many laws in our constitution, why? Firstly, it is because sometimes people forget their moral and limits to get advantages of situations and they do the thing without following legislation. Secondly, it is also important to stop bad thing happened in our society. For instance, nowadays server crime is rising tremendously; however, the government has been applied so many restrictions on using the internet which is again a good thing about laws.
On the flip side, some people think that it does not affect so much because it depends on the mentality of human begins. For example, there are so many strong laws are already existed, nevertheless, the crime rate in most of the countries is not going down. Human behaviour can change only by self-motivation.
In the nutshell, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that laws change human behaviour; it makes people responsible and they can think about the consequences of their action according to the legislations before doing anything wrong; however, understanding of consequences depends on moral values as well that person have.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22672064777 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98908832024 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2762463833 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240381862458 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831036585541 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533242732279 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145459411044 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378965169855 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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