Large shopping malls are replacing small
local shops in cities and towns. In your own experience, is it a positive
development?
In the modern age where every aspect getting influance by good life style, our shoppings and daily purchange getting change and making large shopping malls are tacking over small local shops in cities and town becoming a heated debutable point. Some of the comodities find this change as positive devlopment otherhand some the comunities finding this change negeative. Going further in this essay we will check all the corrosponding element.
Firstly, megamalls are in trend and being a status symbol for brandseekars as it provided globle brand under one roof, one more primitive point its connecting us with trending style and fashion which arebeing popular in different corner of the world. Moreover, mall provides all the basic and expensive stuff in one place as metro cities do not have much spach to hangout these are becoming a fun place added in to this phenomenon PVR, food stall adding charm in to these malls.
However, these mega mall influance people and encrease their expences to buy branded stuff and significantly promoting to buy stuff which are outof budget. One more disadvantage of that local shop are getting impacted by these mall as trend are changing but we should not forget our daily uses thing like bread and butter or milk can be eaisly available in these market and its also impacting local shop owner and their economy.
To recepiculate with all the actue point which we mentioned above mega mall are defineatly a good sign of devlopment but their flip side can not be ignored as in India most are the rular aeras are not devloped and we hope in future we will see them as our metro cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87769784173 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4152633875 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4516678298 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.5 104.977214359 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 20.9669160288 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139646219532 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571252838 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079316066001 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808347166342 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581797572262 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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