The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
In the days of morden where people are moving very fast with their lifestyle forget about ecosystem and animals. Animal right introduced in 1970's for the same favor to save animals become a heated debut. Some of the commodity advocate this right and considering Zoos or national parks are playing good role to save our animals. However other community disregards this phenomenon based on misshandling of animal in those aera. We will discuss all the corrosponding acute point regarding this topic.
Firstly, we all know our action and activities impacting animal lifes excample deforestation and polution in see and air. Going further wild animal and creature are bond to suffer to assist those animal goverment has policies to keep them safe and secure one of the excample would give "save tiger" movement. If we do not have national park or Zoo its impossible to save these rare animals. Second acute point is that in Zoo these animal feel safe and get care from care taker which will be diffuclt in open sky.
However, some of the society menber consider zoo and such park should not be available and animal should be live free life. We have seen many crime releated to zoo like not proper care given to animals. In past there are few incident where if found Zoo are total fail to keep animal safe and caused to their death, many global report share those stastics.
To conclude, while accomulating all my thought and point i would say Zoo or such place whose intention to save our animal should be appriacte and these NGO or policy should be available with proper and basic fecilities for animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85198555957 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39799796595 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9104302536 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313054968837 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109132225493 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063071814093 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201573256516 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353265467749 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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