The large SHOPPING MOLL
The importance the large shopping moll which was always debatable has was become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial with others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent year. In my opinion, the both proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems form the fact that shopping moll available is good brand consequently , discount on heavy shopping and produces ’fixed price. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that shopping moll popularity has grown rapidly and are the transforming urban lifestyle Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my view point , there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that .nowadays popular trend in shopping is the establishment of large shopping moll .Besides cheaper price as advantage of large shopping moll compared to small shops., Hence it is apparent why many are in favors of this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above ,one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of are indeed too great to ignore. ultimately customers are able to buy good quality products at a cheaper rate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1906779661 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74334678032 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9294669454 50.4703680194 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.111111111 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345529030808 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119895636848 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154703610046 0.071462118173 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209953900938 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169583043523 0.0609392437508 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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