Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?
In this day and age, there is an ongoing debate among people about whether a law could change human behavior or not. While there are conclusively valid arguments to claim that human nature is immutable, I am highly inclined to believe that legislations play a vital role in the development of society. Providing solid academic evidence, I will analyse both sides and draw a rational conclusion.
To begin with, critics argue that law can only give direction to individuals, which cannot affect a person's habit. For instance, according to a study undertaken at Harvard University, in spite of imposing strict laws on drunk driving for several decades, the crime rate has not yet become lower. Although the absence of legislation can create chaos in society, the ever-increasing statistics indicate that it is not an effective tool for reform. Thus, there is tangible evidence why such an opinion has not garnered support.
Furthermore, it should be mentioned that if proper legislations were introduced in a country, it would be kept in order and harmony. From my experience, the results of an experiment conducted by Melbourne University revealed that not only restrictions help in public awareness, but they may also act as a deterrent to would-be offenders. Those who were aware of hefty fines in case of not acting in accordance with rules, were twice less likely to be involved in a crime. Hence, scientific research strongly supports the hypothesis that law is inextricably intertwined with the safety of other citizens.
In a nutshell, despite several compelling arguments on both sides, my sentiment is that the privileges of rules and regulations outweigh its flaws substantially. I think the authorities should take immediate measures to enforce a stricter law on different illegal activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...n to individuals, which cannot affect a persons habit. For instance, according to a stu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25517241379 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01238032064 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686206896552 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5108117547 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141069905166 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429499281845 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596660195592 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755469773946 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537457971729 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.