Law is the only way to exercise control over the public to maintain peace. People usually behave in a way that is in accordance with the law. It is true that human behavior is governed by legislation. Strict lasso makes better countries & people respond to a situation in an orderly manner.
To begin with, countries with the strict laws have a minimal crime rate. For example, in Singapore smuggling drugs is a criminal offense and one has to face the death penalty and therefore such activities hardly take place there. This exemplifies that laws can alter people’s behavior. Thus, there is an obvious link between laws and human behavior.
Furthermore, in The UAE, kissing in public is a punishable offense. Every citizen of this country is aware of the law and it is hard to find anyone breaking the law and it is the culture of the country. This example clearly shows that the absence of law may create an unfavorable environment for the smooth functioning of the society. Therefore, legislation definitely affects our behavior.
To summarize, the above analysis establishes that there is a strong positive correlation between law and human behavior. It has been proven that many countries use lass as a major tool for reforms. It is expected that lawmakers will continue to use it for the betterment of the society in future.
- Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion? 80
- In education system, assessment through formal written examination still valid? 77
- Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not? 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ividly remember that people didn't use to fasten their seatbelts while driving...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 183.0 242.827586207 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49180327869 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23706733249 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644808743169 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4596999294 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202937135202 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914155318504 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948608193781 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15127324329 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130520969641 0.0609392437508 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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