The effect of law on human behaviour, which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of law has sparked the controversy over the potential impact on the human behaviour in the recent years. In my opinion, law can have huge impact on the human behaviour which others may disagree with this opinion of mine. This essay will elaborate both sides in greater details and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons on how law can have an impact on the human behaviour, but the most conspicuous stems from the fact that the wild nature of human beings can be controlled if they are restricted by some laws. For instance, if there were no rules or speed limits on the road, then people would behave violently, leading to many accidents or casualties. The fear of penalties or fines prevent human from such behaviour and in time people got used to these rules and adjust their behaviour accordingly. Therefore, law can indeed change human behaviour.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that human behaviour cannot be affected by law. There are some reasons to back that up but the most salient one is that a violent person will always behave violently no matter what the law states. Even the fear of penalties might not have any impact on their behaviour. Hence, in those cases, law will not have any influence on human behaviour.
For what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that law can have an effect on a person's behaviour if that person chooses to follow it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80291970803 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53162637044 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543795620438 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.295404279 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.5454803188 0.242375264174 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223723639336 0.0925447433944 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184626240416 0.071462118173 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334501522636 0.151781067708 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918933161645 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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