Learning needs time and focus. What is your opinion on employment during studies, i.e, combining education and employment?
Over recent years, The phenomenon of learning and working at the same time corresponded and impacts have sparked a heated debate.
Some people believe that learning and working need time and focus and cannot combine, while others believe that is essential for education fees.
I opine learning and working simultaneous have tremendous benefits in personal and career growth.
This essay will discuss how multitasking helps students to achieve their personal goal and accomplish employment after their studies and draws a conclusion based on the facts provided.
From the student point of view, students who just focus on the eduction may get a good percentage but may not have outside world knowledge. For example, students just focus on studies may be prone and stick to only educational knowledge till academic complete, once they come out of college after graduation and attend for interviews then they need to face challenges to cooperate with knowledge.
Thus, not gaining knowledge from the outside world during education will leads to unemployment.
With the realm from employment, students who learn and earn during education may gain good knowledge both on studies and outside world. For instance, students who focus on both education and employment simultaneously during studies will have a great advantage with a non-employment student as they focus on a career as well as education at the same time. Therefore, students who employed during studies will be more focus on education and career.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides I profoundly believe that combining employment during studies has more benefits than just learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cooperating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: cooperating
...views then they need to face challenges to cooperate with knowledge. Thus, not gaining know...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...the outside world during education will leads to unemployment. With the realm from e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4030418251 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74784221636 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532319391635 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2710011211 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280791826336 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118134371082 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795061799527 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11607672377 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766822385187 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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